Kia Ora Patriva, my name is Kyra from Grey Main School. I like your slide on Metaphors because there is heaps of information on what a metaphor is. This reminds me of doing my camp metaphors like the nails were Porcupine quills or the sleeping bags were snakes. Do you know what a simile is? Maybe next time you could try doing some of your own metaphors as an example so the reader gets an idea of what it is! He Whetu Koe!
Hi Kyra Thank you for your comment sorry for not replying, I had a technical problem. I will definitely try to do my own similes. Thank you for visiting my blog!
Aloha Pavitra, You have got a very good argument going but at the same time are showing what metaphors are. With the 2 slides you did I was very intrueged but there no more slides, so maybe add more facts.
Hi my name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School and I like your post about metaphors. I also liked that you added lot's of detail to the page. Next time maybe add some more examples you made yourself.
Hi Mia Thank you for your amazing comment and wonderful feedback. I will definitely make my own examples for the slide. Thank you for visiting my blog!
Kia Ora Patriva, my name is Kyra from Grey Main School. I like your slide on Metaphors because there is heaps of information on what a metaphor is. This reminds me of doing my camp metaphors like the nails were Porcupine quills or the sleeping bags were snakes. Do you know what a simile is? Maybe next time you could try doing some of your own metaphors as an example so the reader gets an idea of what it is! He Whetu Koe!
ReplyDeleteHi Kyra
DeleteThank you for your comment sorry for not replying, I had a technical problem. I will definitely try to do my own similes. Thank you for visiting my blog!
Hi Pavitra.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great explanation of metaphors!
I like how you added videos of metaphors in the slide.
From Elias.
Hi Elias
DeleteThank you for your amazing comment.This comment made my day. I will definitely visit your blog soon. Thank you for visiting my blog!
Aloha Pavitra,
ReplyDeleteYou have got a very good argument going but at the same time are showing what metaphors are. With the 2 slides you did I was very intrueged but there no more slides, so maybe add more facts.
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
Hi Julia
DeleteThank you for your amazing comment. I will surly try to add more slides to my presentation. Thanks for the good feedback.
Hi my name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School and I like your post about metaphors. I also liked that you added lot's of detail to the page. Next time maybe add some more examples you made yourself.
ReplyDeleteHi Mia
DeleteThank you for your amazing comment and wonderful feedback. I will definitely make my own examples for the slide. Thank you for visiting my blog!
Hello Pavitra I'm Nikita from YMS and I am a year 5. I like your slide about metaphors,I think you should work on the writing you put before you post.
ReplyDeleteHi Nikita
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment and feedback. I will make sure to check my writing and fix it. Thank you for visiting my blog!