Firefly forest, a place I was forbidden to ever go, for which I never knew why. Leaves rustled on forest floor, and birds sang chirpy songs. I looked up and there above me was a firefly, not a huge one, not a green one, just one simple firefly. I almost actually felt happy around it , until it flew away. Wanting to be happy again I followed, it was beautiful, I looked at thousands of fireflies just waiting for me to smile. I didn’t have anywhere else to go so I decided to stay. But it wasn't long until it changed.
Wednesday 27 July 2016
Fireflies-100 word challenge
Firefly forest, a place I was forbidden to ever go, for which I never knew why. Leaves rustled on forest floor, and birds sang chirpy songs. I looked up and there above me was a firefly, not a huge one, not a green one, just one simple firefly. I almost actually felt happy around it , until it flew away. Wanting to be happy again I followed, it was beautiful, I looked at thousands of fireflies just waiting for me to smile. I didn’t have anywhere else to go so I decided to stay. But it wasn't long until it changed.
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I like this complex sentence that combines several related ideas together..." I looked up and there above me was a firefly, not a huge one, not a green one, just one simple firefly."
ReplyDeleteI wish your work had finished without me wondering what change had taken place.
I made like that
DeleteYou really hooked me in with your beginning, well done. I am also interested to know if you will turn this story into a novel.
ReplyDeleteI am turning it into my 5000 word novelette
DeleteYou really took me on an adventure in your 100 word story well done!
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