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Friday 18 March 2016

the dancing candy corn and the singing jelly bean of doom part 1
once upon a time there lived a candy corn who loved to dance.he danced all day and he also sleep danced all night.it was very annoying for the candy corn’s parents and neighbours,so one day everyone had enough of the dancing candy corn so they thought if they drove him to the south side of the kitchen then he wouldn't annoy anyone.when the dancing candy corn’s neighbours asked the dancing candy corn if he wanted to come to the south side of the kitchen to pick up something the dancing candy corn was delighted to come.little did they know about  the singing jelly bean of doom who lives at the south side of the kitchen. the next day the dancing candy corn and his neighbours went to the south side of the kitchen and the dancing candy corn’s neighbours told the dancing candy corn that she needed to go into the fridge,get the secret thing and come back here.”Okay”said the dancing candy corn.the dancing candy corn began her journey,she went past the sink where she almost drowned,then she went across the microwave,after that she finally made it to the fridge. she took a peek inside she saw something she went inside,she suddenly felt really cold she did not remember the fridge being so cold,she was just about to get out when the door of the fridge closed and evil laughter came from nowhere then the evil laughter stopped and said realize something said the voice.the dancing candy corn thought long and hard but he couldn't get it.no said the dancing candy corn “who are you”.”ha ha” said the voice I am the singing jelly bean of doom and I am going to destroy the whole kitchen. then why are you called the singing jelly bean of doom if you don’t sing asked the dancing candy corn. I don’t know the singing jelly bean of doom said as he confronted the dancing candy corn.the singing jelly bean of doom looked rather small in person he sounded so big and spooky he actually looks kinda cute.don’t hurt me cried the dancing candy corn.don’t worry said the singing jelly bean of doom “I am going to banish you from this world  not hurt you.”no” said the dancing candy corn of doom don’t banish me please i beg you please don’t banish me please please.enough said the singing jelly bean of doom i am going to banish you and that’s final no excuses. I am going to have to make some preparations for the banishment so you will be banished after a week agree,and oh yeah no attempts to escape.What am I going to do.        
                                    To be continued…

1 comment:

  1. This is a massive effort, Pavitra. You need to work on your punctuation, starting sentences off with a capital letter.

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